Mirsa Mariela
Posts : 14
Join date : 2010-02-18
 | Subject: unit 9 traveling by car  Fri Feb 26, 2010 6:07 pm | |
| traveling by car has many advantage , first you can listen music and you can use the time in different ways, also You can make your own decisions and do whatever you want with your car, for examplen when you leave a the hours you want, and has many disadventages, there are stressful traffic jams and you can`t rend or watch the world when you drive, and is very expensive, and i donpt relax when you drive because is very difficut the people in Guatemala. I like it the car , i donpt like trave in the bus. | |
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Join date : 2009-11-23
| | Subject: Re: unit 9 traveling by car Wed Mar 10, 2010 8:00 pm | |
| - Mirsa Mariela wrote:
- traveling by car has many advantage , first you can listen music and you can use the time in different ways, also You can make your own decisions and do whatever you want with your car, for examplen when you leave a the hours you want, and has many disadventages, there are stressful traffic jams and you can`t rend or watch the world when you drive, and is very expensive, and i donpt relax when you drive because is very difficut the people in Guatemala. I like it the car , i donpt like trave in the bus.
Take a look again at this. This is one long sentence. Break them up. For each idea, write one sentence. Use complete sentences with capital letters, and periods. Check for spelling and coherence. Cecy | |
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