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To pass English you need a passing grade in 3 different areas: 1. Attendance (85% or more) 2. Class Work (75% or more) 3. Exams (75% or more) These grades will NOT be averaged.
Para aprobar el curso se necesitan calificaciones aprobadas de tres áreas diferentes: 1. Asistencia (85% o más) 2. Trabajo en Clase (75% o más) 3. Exámenes (75% o más) Las calificaciones NO serán promediadas.

 

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Ana Lucia




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PostSubject: Draft Description   Draft Description Icon_minitimeTue Feb 23, 2010 8:37 pm

My brother and I are not very different in character, that is why we don´t get along well sometimes, but in every thing else we are complete different and maybe is because he is 10 years older than me.

We both get mad easily so we fight sometimes.

He likes to tell jokes and I enjoy to hearing it, because he is very funny.

He likes to play and see soccer games and I don’t like it. We don´t look the same physically however there are people who say that we look like.
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Patty


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PostSubject: Help ... Patty   Draft Description Icon_minitimeTue Feb 23, 2010 10:43 pm

You write:
We don´t look the same physically ... however there are people who say that we look like...

And my suggest is:
However there are people say: "He is somewhat like with me"

See you,

Patty
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PostSubject: Re: Draft Description   Draft Description Icon_minitimeWed Feb 24, 2010 6:05 pm

Try to make the paragraph a little longer.

Thanks. Very Happy
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