Draft 1 (Letter)

Guatemala City.
February 15th 2010

Dear Nick:

I am very happy that we are going to write letters to know each other.
In this first letter I am going to tell you about myself.

My name is Ana Lucia Margarita, my parents called me that because my mother´s names is Ana, my aunt´s name is Lucia and my grandmother´s name was Margarita. I was born in February 27th in Guatemala City. I have been living in Guatemala all my life. I have three older brothers, theirs names are Omar, Julio and Roberto. My parent’s names are Ana and Julio.
I have 2 nieces: Michelle and Paula and 1 nephew, David.

I´m studying Administracion de Empresas in the Rafael Landivar University.

I do not have any hobbies so I am going to tell you what I like. I like to watch television especially sitcoms like the bing bang theory, two and a half man, friends and glee. I like puzzle games like tetris, Sudoku and zuma.

That´s all for this first letter. I hope you can write me soon.

Take care.

Ana Lucia.

Dear Ana Lucía, I suggest the following changes:


my grandmother´s name WAS (is) Margarita

I´m studying Administracion de Empresas (Business Administration) in (at) the (out) Rafael Landivar University.

See you,

Patty

Take a look at Patty's suggestion. She is on to something.

Cecy